We decided to write our own Traction Man stories set in a a variety of different places. The first was the fearsome depths of the dangerous Pacific Ocean (also known as the bath).
We tried to describe what it would be like for Traction Man exploring the bath water.
(This was our first attempt at word processing. I think next time we will have a bit of a lesson on what the Caps Lock key does, and how to turn it on/off!)
I can see a dirty fork and I can see a dirty pan it might be yuck and disgusting.
Traction man and scrubbing brush are zooming through the sink when the evoo dishcloth came and jast took him. he got back up . it was dack when he came up then scrubbing brush came and rescued him thank you litte scrubbing brush you can be pet.
It is darkas as nignt There might be an euil cloth and that is spooky.
I can see scrubbing brush tracham man
an the euil dr banana.Bananana peels arebad.
I can see the dishcloth.
The dishcloth was scary
because the dishclothis.
Quiet.It was dark and
spooky.
It looks very dirtry and dark. The. Dish cloth waS POISNESS AND
TRACTION MAN . JUST GOT A.A WAY.
I see traction man in the tub. he is on a fish.
It was dark . the dishcloth was scary .It was disuxing. I was so sckery.
I can see lots of bubbles and a dishcloth. Traction Man was so surprised and it almost suffocated poor old Traction Man. Luckily Scrubbing Brush came to the rescue.
I saw a plat it wos stinky in lil the evil cloth was going to kalip me ceut scrubing brush save me thank you
I can see a beshcoth
he is scary.
Ican see bubbles.
It is very dark.
It was very scary
Traction man was very scared.
It was dirty.
It was cnot clean and dark as mig ht. It is here thakyou traction . man
It is smelly. Trachon man is cold. IT IS qUIET. TRAHCHON MAN IS ANGRy.
it was dark.
it was dirty
it was scary
it was cold
i saw funny things
it was smelly
it was gross
It was not cleen and it was sceery and it was dark.
I CAN SEE A DISHCLOTH. IT WOS DIRTY. ITWOSSCARY.SCRUBBING BRUSH I CAN SEE A CUP AND IT WAS DIRTY.
It is very dark.
There are bubbles.
It is soapy.
It's spooky.
I can see a poisonous cloth.Not
clean drains. Spiky knives. Smelly woter.
It is dark as night there is a evil dishclolh and he is poisonous. He found the seive .The evil dish cbth poisonous
Traction Man and Scrubbing Brush are underwater. Traction Man
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Wow very descriptive sentences Room 11! I love the strong words you have used. Well done on your first go at word processing too!
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